Book 7 of seven in the Harvest Moon Week: small books written the week the Harvest Moon rose full over the ridge, each one set on one of the nights that follow it. This one is set on Friday, October 2.
The Dinette Table, Friday Night
There is a sheet of paper on the dinette table in the camper tonight, weighted down at one corner with a coffee mug so the draft from the door will not take it.
It is a plain printed page. At the top it says, in large letters, what the camper is and why it has come back. Below that is a short numbered list of what still needs fixing. At the bottom is one sentence asking that the work order stay open under the ninety day repair warranty. The steward read it over three times at the kitchen table in the house before printing it, and then carried it out across the frosted grass in the dark, with a flashlight in one hand and the page held flat against his chest so it would not crease.
The camper sits where it has sat for nine days, leveled on its blocks at the edge of the yard, its little windows dark. It was cold inside, colder than the night outside it seemed, the way closed-up rooms are cold in autumn. He set the page down, set the mug on it, looked at it for a while under the flashlight, and came back in.
This weekend the camper goes back across the state line to the shop that was supposed to have fixed it.
THE TRAVELING HOUSE . THE EVENING MEASURE
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| Photoperiod .......... about 11h 43m, and shrinking |
| Sunrise / Sunset ..... about 07:06 / about 18:48 |
| Moon ................. Waning, near last quarter |
| Low tonight .......... near 38 F, frost likely |
| Items fixed .......... 2 |
| Items still open ..... 4 |
| Record kept .......... all of it, in writing |
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RAIDHO . THE RIGHT ROAD TIWAZ . THE TRUE MEASURE
Go back by the proper way, Say what is so, plainly,
in good order, and on time. and let the record stand.
Nine days ago this blog wrote a cheerful little paragraph about the traveling house coming home, whole and without charge, and called it a good omen. That was written the evening it came back, before anyone had looked closely. This is the rest of the story, or as much of it as has happened so far.
Chapter 1: What Came Home and What Did Not
The camper is small. It is the kind of travel trailer a family buys when it wants to go somewhere without spending the night in a motel, and it has done that for this household more than a few times: a lake, a mountain, a field behind a friend’s barn. It has a dinette that folds into a bed, a two burner stove, a little sink, a washroom the size of a phone booth, and a fresh water tank under the floor that feeds all of it.
It went to the shop with a short list of warranty problems. It came back just after the equinox. The shop said it was done.
The first evening, everything looked fine, which is how it always looks the first evening. The awning arm, which had been bent and would not lock, now locked. The battery on the tongue, which had been riding loose in its tray, was strapped down tight. Those two things were plainly fixed, and the steward was glad of it, and said so.
Then, over the next few days, the rest came out.
The fresh water gauge, which had been reading wrong, still read wrong. It knows two words now: empty and full. Put five gallons in, it says empty. Put ten more, it says empty. Top it off and it jumps straight to full, as if the tank had filled in an instant. A gauge that only knows two states is not a gauge. It is a rumor.
The faucet in the little kitchen still leaked. Not from the spout, which would have been easy to see, but from the water line underneath, inside the cabinet, where it drips quietly onto the floor of the cupboard and soaks into the wood. The steward found it by putting his hand on the cabinet floor and feeling the damp. That is the worst kind of leak, the kind that works in the dark.
The fresh water tank was supposed to have been cleaned. It had not been. You can tell.
And on one of the dinette cushions there was a new mark, a dark scuff that had not been there when the camper left. When the steward asked about it, the answer was that it must have been there before.
Two fixed. Four not. That is the honest count.
Chapter 2: The Letter
There are several ways to handle a thing like this, and most of them are bad.
You can get angry, and call, and raise your voice on the phone, and feel better for about ten minutes. You can let it go, and live with a leak under the sink and a gauge that lies, and quietly decide never to go back to that shop, and tell everyone you meet what they did. You can post a furious review. You can send a lawyer’s letter before anyone has had a chance to make it right.
The household did none of those things. The steward sat down at the kitchen table and wrote a letter.
It took most of an evening. It was not long, but it was careful. It began by saying thank you for the two things that had been fixed, because they had been fixed, and that was true. Then it went through the four things that had not, one at a time, each in its own short paragraph. What the problem was. What had been promised. What was found on return. And for each, a photograph or a short video: the gauge jumping from empty to full with the tank half filled, the water beading on the line under the sink, the inside of the tank, the cushion with the mark on it. No adjectives. No accusations. Just the thing, and the proof of the thing, and a plain request that it be made right.
The letter asked that the work order stay open under the shop’s ninety day repair warranty, and it proposed a day to bring the camper back. It was signed with the steward’s name and sent in writing, so that there would be a copy on both sides with the date on it.
And that was the whole of the strategy. Not a phone call. Phone calls are pleasant and quick, and they leave nothing behind. Two people remember a phone call two different ways a week later, and neither of them is lying. A letter says the same thing on the tenth day that it said on the first. A letter with photographs attached says it with evidence.
The shop wrote back. The camper goes back this weekend.
Chapter 3: The Lawspeaker on the Rock
The old Norse had a word for the place where disputes were settled: the thing. It was an assembly of free people, held outdoors at a known place, at a known time of year. There were small local things for a district and great ones for a whole land. Quarrels over land, over cattle, over killings and insults and debts were brought there and argued in front of everyone, and judgment was given in the open.
In Iceland the great assembly was the Althing, which met each summer in a wide valley with a wall of rock along one side. At the foot of that wall was a place called the Law Rock, and on it stood the lawspeaker. The lawspeaker was elected, and served for three years, and his task was one that sounds impossible now: he had to know the law by heart, and each summer he recited a third of it aloud to the gathered people, so that over his three years the whole of it had been spoken. When a question of law came up that no one was sure of, he was the one who answered.
For a long time the law lived only in memory and in voice. In the winter of 1117 and 1118, the Icelanders decided to write it down, and the work was done at a farmstead over that winter, and the next summer it was read out at the Althing. There is a saying that runs through the old law codes and the sagas alike, and it is usually given as: with law shall the land be built. It turns up in the saga of Burnt Njal and in the old law books of the Scandinavian mainland.
What the lawspeaker did every summer was an act of keeping the record. A law that is not spoken aloud before witnesses fades. People begin to remember it the way they would like it to have been. Two neighbors each remember their boundary a few feet further out. The lawspeaker’s recitation was a correction, spoken to everyone at once, so that no one could say later that they had not heard.
The letter at the kitchen table is a very small version of the same thing. It says: here is what was agreed. Here is what happened. Here is what we are asking. It says it once, in writing, to both parties, so that no one’s memory has to carry it alone.
The old gathering place had another feature worth mentioning. The thing was protected by a sacred peace. Weapons were not to be drawn there. People who were enemies elsewhere could stand side by side at the Law Rock and argue their cases without fear. The peace of the thing did not mean people did not disagree. They disagreed fiercely. It meant they disagreed in the open, by the rules, in words instead of blows.
Courtesy with a spine is nothing more than that: the peace of the thing, carried into ordinary life.
Chapter 4: Stone, Ring, and Word
Speech fades, and the old northerners knew it. So when something mattered enough, they cut it into stone.
There are thousands of runestones still standing across Scandinavia, most of them in Sweden, most raised in the late Viking Age. The great majority say some version of the same thing: this person raised this stone in memory of that person. A father for a son, a widow for a husband, brothers for a brother who died far away. But they were not only memorials. Many of them were also records. By naming who raised the stone and for whom, they told everyone passing by who had inherited from whom, which family held this land, whose claim ran back how far.
There is a man named Jarlabanke, north of what is now Stockholm, who raised several stones about himself while he was still alive. One of them says that he alone owned all of the district. Another says he made the thing place there. He built a causeway across wet ground and lined it with his stones, so that anyone walking it would read, again and again, who had built it and who owned the land around it. It is a little vain. It is also a man making very sure that the record would outlast every argument.
The stone is the letter with photographs attached. It does not change its story when it is inconvenient. It does not remember things differently a week later.
The oath-ring is the other half. In the Icelandic sagas and the old book of the settlements, there are descriptions of a ring kept in the temple, lying on the altar or worn by the chieftain at gatherings, and people swore their oaths upon it. When a matter was to be settled at a thing, the oath was taken on the ring, and the witnesses heard it. Your word, spoken over the ring, bound you in front of the gods and in front of your neighbors both.
The old northerners did not really separate the two. A spoken oath and a cut stone were the same thing at different speeds. Both were ways of saying: this is fixed now. This is what I have said, and I will stand behind it. The runes on the stone are words that do not fade. The oath on the ring is a word you have made as hard as stone by putting yourself behind it.
The steward thought about this, writing the letter. Every sentence in it was a small oath. Every claim in it had to be true, and provable, because it was going down in writing and would stay there. That is why there are no adjectives in it. You do not swear on a ring that a shop was careless or lazy or dishonest. You swear on it that the gauge reads empty when the tank is half full. You swear to the thing you can show.
A written word is a kind of oath because it cannot be taken back. That cuts both ways. It holds the shop to what the shop promised. It also holds the household to what the household claims. Write only what you would swear to.
Chapter 5: Forseti’s Hall
Among the gods there is one whose whole work is the settling of disputes.
His name is Forseti, and he is the son of Baldr, the bright god, and of Nanna. The Eddas give him very little space: a stanza in one poem and a few lines in Snorri. But what they say is clear. He has a hall called Glitnir, with pillars of gold and a roof of silver, and he sits there most days. Everyone who comes to him with a quarrel goes away reconciled. Snorri calls it the best place of judgment among gods and men.
That word is worth sitting with. Not victorious. Not vindicated. Reconciled. The people who came to Forseti with a quarrel did not leave with one party crushed and the other gloating. They left with the matter settled, both of them, able to go on.
There is a small story, much later, from the island of Heligoland in the North Sea, which was once called Fositesland after a god the Frisians worshipped there, and scholars have long wondered whether he was the same as Forseti. The story comes from a medieval Frisian tradition and it goes something like this. Twelve lawspeakers of the Frisians were sent out by a king to gather the law of their people, and they were caught in a storm and driven out to sea without oars or rudder. They prayed for help, and a thirteenth man appeared among them in the boat, carrying an axe over his shoulder. He steered them to land, threw his axe onto the shore, and where it struck a spring welled up. Then he sat down among them and taught them the law, and vanished. Whether that thirteenth man was ever meant to be Forseti is argued about to this day, and we will not settle it. But it is a good image all the same: law as the thing that steers a boat without oars safely to shore.
This is what the steward hopes for, taking the camper back. Not a win. Not a confession from the shop that they did poor work. Not a refund or a quarrel or a scene. A reconciliation: the gauge reading true, the line under the sink dry, the tank clean, the matter of the cushion settled one way or another, and both sides able to shake hands at the end of it. A shop that does good work the second time is a shop worth going back to. A customer who came back politely with evidence and let them make it right is a customer worth keeping.
Forseti’s hall has pillars of gold, but its real treasure is that people leave it on speaking terms. The best letter is one that makes that possible.
Chapter 6: The Guest and the Small Ship
The old poem of the High One begins with the rules for travelers. It is not a lofty beginning. It is practical to the point of plainness. A guest who has come in from the road needs fire, because his knees are cold. He needs food and clothing, because he has come over the mountains. He needs water, a towel, and a friendly welcome. A traveler has to be watchful, and keep his wits about him, and not overstay. The host owes the guest shelter; the guest owes the host good conduct. That is the guest-right, and it is one of the oldest threads in the whole northern tradition.
A travel trailer is a strange thing to think about in that light. It is a house for guests, a house you carry with you so that you can be a guest anywhere: in a campground, in a state park, in a field behind a friend’s barn. It is also, in its small way, a ship. It is built tight like a ship, with everything folding and fitting and doubled in purpose. It carries its own water in its belly like a ship. It has to be sealed against weather like a ship. And like a ship, it is only as good as its smallest leak.
The Norse built their ships with care that is hard to overstate, plank lapped over plank and riveted, caulked with tarred wool or animal hair, every seam checked. A ship that leaks a little takes on water all day, and a crew that does not bail sinks. You do not ignore a drip under the sink on a boat. You do not trust a gauge that only knows empty and full when your water is all you have.
That is why this matters more than it might seem. It is not about a cushion. It is about whether the little house can be trusted on the road, far from home, when the only water is what is in the tank and the only dry wood is what is under the sink.
The shop, in its own way, was the host. The camper was its guest for weeks. The household trusted it to be sheltered and cared for and sent home whole. That is not a small trust. The letter is a guest’s answer to a host who fell short: not angry, not an insult to the house, but plain. Here is what I needed. Here is what I found. I am coming back, in good faith, and I expect that faith returned.
Raidho is the rune of the road and of the ride, and of doing things in right order. It is the right road taken in the right way. Going back is not a defeat. It is the road continuing.
Troth: Courtesy with a Spine
- Thank them for what they did right. Two things were fixed. Say so first, and mean it.
- Keep everything in writing. A phone call leaves no record. A letter says the same thing on the tenth day as on the first.
- Show, do not characterize. Photographs, videos, dates. No adjectives. Swear only to what you can show.
- Ask for a specific remedy. Keep the work order open. Fix these four things. Name a day.
- Leave the note on the table. Make it easy for the person doing the work to do it right.
- Aim for reconciliation, not victory. Forseti’s hall is judged by whether people leave it on speaking terms.
- Be patient, and go back. Persistence without anger is the strongest kind.
What Still Sits on the Scale
The camper goes back this weekend. The note is on the table. The letter is in both inboxes with its photographs and its dates. The ninety days are running, and there is time within them.
Whether the gauge comes home reading true, whether the line under the sink comes home dry, whether the tank comes home clean, and how the matter of the cushion is settled, none of that is known yet. It may take one more trip. It may take two. The household is ready for either.
What is known is that the record is kept, the tone is courteous, and the request is clear. That is all anyone can do from this side of the counter.
The Blessing
Hail Forseti, in his hall of gold and silver, who sends every quarrel home reconciled.
Hail Tyr, who keeps the true measure and stands by the given word.
Hail to the lawspeakers, who said it all aloud so no one could forget.
Hail to the rune-carvers, who cut the record into stone.
Hail to the little traveling house, our small ship, patient on its blocks.
May the road be dry this weekend, and the hitch go on easy. May the note on the table be read, and the list be worked in order. May the gauge learn every number between empty and full. May the line under the sink be dry as summer dust. May the ones who do the work find it worth doing well. May the ninety days be enough, and the handshake at the end be honest. May every word written in this matter be one we would swear to.
The record is kept. The tone is kind. The road goes back. Say it once, in writing, and stand behind it. Then be patient.
Wes hal.
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